Dad’s heart was pounding fast like a fast cheetah.
SIONE
Dad’s face was glowing blue like fire.
His neck bones were bulging out.
Dad yelled so loud that all the shiny clear windows were exploding into shards.
Dad yelled so loud he sounded like a fighting bull.
His voice was so loud he made the house shake like a big earthquake.
Dad’s voice was loud. He looked like he could not even breath once.
Dad’s head was about to explode.
Dad was so mad that fire, red steam came out from his mouth and ears.
He was so super mad that everyone thought he was a huge fire monster.
Dad got so mad that when he yelled people from miles away could hear the voice going all around the world.
SIONE
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